Inside on a Rainy Day

Playing
Xbox kinect
inside, on a rainy day
was like once watching
the four,
red-funneled
steamship
on the
horizon
depart.

Reviews

[apennylate]

*Welcome to "Pure Rhymes" Thanks for joining, great to have you...!*

I love gaming, and this brought a reminder of doing the exact same thing to mind, aha... Great write...

[Brett Hernan]

Thanks for creating the group and thinking to invite me, although my poems don't rhyme much, lately.
Have you ever pasted up poetry on a bus stop wall? I'm not a cop.