An intro to this story I've been working on.

Just part of a story I've been working on for a while.

My name is Morgan Smith. I have two sisters named Emma and Hannah. We ran away from home when I was sixteen so I could escape the draft. Emma was fourteen and Hannah was eleven. We set up a camp near San Fransisco and soon other kids joined us from across the country. Now Emma and I are stuck in the middle of it and we are in way over heads. Are little act of resistance has grown to remarkable preportions.

Author's Note

Feel free to be brutal. I want feedback on the writing style. I want to hear if it's boring or interesting and if you would like to hear more. I would also like hear what you think the story is about based on this paragraph. Please comment! Thank you!

Reviews

[EyeBrowz]

Sounds good to me! Are you going to add some drama, or devastation to the story?