FAR TOO LATE

FAR TOO LATE

I saw her standing in the corner 

when the lights dimmed.

Red cheeks with a crooked smile

spoke deadly temptation.

She stood there and  danced 

as the lights drifted through the shadows.

I wanted to build up courage

but i know the time would be a waste.

I had been far too late...

Reviews

[kyam]

Very feeling and engaging. I was lost in the poem for a time. Very feeling, thirsting for more and more. Beautifully written, don't stop writing, please.

[Miss Sharon]

Nicely written. Good imagery and intense feelings shared. I live it! ~Sharon