TONIGHT

i have fallin in love, but remember this is only for the night, tomorrow i will not remember, i am not of the right state of mind, drank more than i know, and tonight, love, you are mine, tomorrow will come soon, lets do this quick, lets give it our all, lets shake this world from within, yes baby, tomorrow i will leave you, but tonight ill be here to hold you tight, so get ready babe, here i come, all night, sleep under the stars, but once the sun brings me back to realization, i shall leave you, im sorry but i was only disoriented and you presented, and i gave, im sorry babe, ill be back tonight..

Reviews

[reminder]

I dig the brutal honesty. Almost a hint of sorrow and regret. The style and structure create a barrage of thoughts coming to the subject rapid fire. I'm an English teacher- I love this! Well done!

[Lovely Lady]

Now if all lovers could be so bold as to be this brutally honest...maybe my heart would still be in one piece... again i love your style!

[[Rampant♍ Rapture..]

That it a wonderful poem and it's very true for many ppl! i love it!

[cfix]

This is amazing really I enjoyed the honesty of your write.

[Dream Slave]

Taking the playa playa thing to the next level huh? Enjoyed the truthfulness of it. Very sincere and honest even though sometimes people wish they would remember...

[Poetic Beauty]

Umm well one night stands aren't my cup of tea. this is a great poem explaining how things like this happen. I once had a one night stand that lasted two months two long. That is the kind of thought and feeling I get from this poem.