New Reapers: New Era

A short summary in a poetic version for my book New Reapers: Genesis. Enjoy.

When you feel the cold hand of death and the end drawing near, the reapers shall come and put an end to your fear. Created from darkness and from light, to preserve the balance and its might. Not to kill, nor to slay, but to keep the creatures of the night at bay. Fight to live and live to fight, all for the purpose of what was right. Creatures had turned the world into hell, while all attempts to resist immediately fell. Humans served corrupted gods of hate, believing this was their eternal fate. Until their saviors rained from the forgotten light, eliminating the evil from its might. Preserving the balance of evil and good, Never to allow any to intrude. The reapers fight as an act of valor, determined never to fall towards their final hour. Though fighting in the shadows never taking glory, it’s time to commence the reapers story.

Reviews

[olla]

I like this very much.. what we percive as bad is not alwys so.. and even death can sometimes be kind.. I like the way you used the concept of balance between good and evil.. not a new concept to me.. well written.. it held me long enough to want to read it again..

[Brian Angeles]

That means a lot thank you

[Kesha]

I really enjoyed this, the flow was really smooth! I loved this! This was a very intriguing piece to me! (:

[Brian Angeles]

Thank you so much. I based this for my book that I am writing on this website

[Kesha]

You are very welcome! And maybe I'll check it out one day.

[Brian Angeles]

I hope you like it

[smilempsn]

Ooopsiee.. that was horror kinda... :-/
How will I sleep after reading this Reaper's story cum poem :-/ :P

Nice way to put down thoughts that are sci-fi to world

[Brian Angeles]

Haha do not fear. The reapers in my novel are the good guys :)

[smilempsn]

..hehe.. And you think that is kinda relief for today night ?? :P

[Brian Angeles]

Well reapers aren't bad or good they are neutral

[smilempsn]

Neutral and Super Natural aa :P :)

[Rosaria_V]

Wow this honestly gave me chills, your soo good!!

[Brian Angeles]

Thank you. This is inspired for the book I'm writing here. I hope you'll read it and ebjoy it as well

[wordwarrior]

Your poem in very thought provoking and of course from the day we are born, death is the only thing we can be sure about. Yes you are right when you say....humans served corrupted gods of hate...seen time and again in history. There has to be a balance, but it's never easy.
Thank you for sharing. Certainly made me think.

[Brian Angeles]

I thank thy for your review and it is always a pleasure to hear others thoughts of the matter

[Cody Williams]

Great writing and a great piece! I loved it! Thanks for sharing it!

-CW

[Brian Angeles]

Your very kind thank you for reviewing

[Cody Williams]

no problem at all!

[Death Girl]

WOW ME LIKEY. good job on this like I said before one of the best writers on here

[Brian Angeles]

That still means a lot to my heart hearing that

[Ezekiel Silver]

An intriguing poem that brings forth a unique view of reapers while also making remarkable imagery. Keep it up.

[Brian Angeles]

Thank you :)

[Ezekiel Silver]

No problem.

[Baby Ricochet]

Not bad. Kind of comic bookie

[Brian Angeles]

Thanks for that haha

[eatme]

Smooth and speedy on the tongue,
my only bump was good/intrude
between the two, I would save the intrude I think

[Brian Angeles]

Thanks so much :) and I got it

[J. Kell]

Well done. I liked the rhyme throughout, it had a good rhythm. This is a beautiful line "Saviors rained from the forgotten light," it made me think of a buddha or avatar type of thing. This is an interesting topic.

[Brian Angeles]

Thank you it is greatly appreciated.