A Peaceful Storm

Gentle love in the midst of a storm

A Peaceful Storm

Rain falls beyond the heavens

Drenching the earth with cleansing properties

To minister to the unforgiven.

Booming sounds of all authorities

Strikes of lightening pierce dark sky’s presence

Lord, may I ponder your qualities?

 

Everlasting from creation to completion,

Longsuffering a plea for humans, receive my love.

 

Gemstone kaleidoscope of rainbow hues, salvation

Gloriously positions in skies above

Gently forgiving after-rain soothes creation.

Tips of a white winged dove

Peacefully sanction the son’s blood relation

Pools of rainfall promise love.

Brianna Brie ~ August 25, 2016

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Brianna!
It is just Richard, come calling and to warmly welcome you home. : )

From reading my simple little poem, "The River, the Clouds, and Us", you know I enjoy the unique flexibility and power of a Free Verse composition, and when one has been blessed with the skill, the genuine capacity to express emotion and feeling, as you have here, there is no doubt this enthralling work portrays God's glorious imagery from a heart and soul that is true and alive to it all.
A very moving and lovely introduction picture, too … the perfect mood-setter.

Stunning in imagery, beauty, and sheer wonderment, Brianna, you've touched me gently to the core!
Thank you for this embracing moment shared! ⁓ Richard

[Brianna Brie]

Thank you for the taking the time to read and respond. Even your reviews are eloquent, and I appreciate your kindness.

Brianna

[Richard🖌]

Some things are just good for us!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Such a beautiful write! You've created amazing imagery and feeling one receives from seeing such beauty! Tyfs!

[Brianna Brie]

Thanks for reviewing. Heading over to your page :)

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're most welcome!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it's all there...nature cleansing itself, the significance of it related to those rainstorms we go through as individuals and how we can be reborn, get a fresh start...

j.

[Brianna Brie]

Thanks for reading, Jacob :)

[Alice Poésy]

So atmospheric and visual. A wonderful description that goes beyond rain and a storm, but is compared to a love that is greater than us all.

I look forward to more of your work.

[Brianna Brie]

Thank you, Alice. You have a cute pen name fun and flirty.