My Desert

I'm going to fry,

It feels so dry.

The land is so flat,

Not much to look at.

Then why on earth,

Do I enjoy this hearth?

Author's Note

Ignore my grammar problems, criticism is welcomed

Reviews

[Annabelle Lee]

Bravo! Flowed really well, clever rhyme scheme and use of syllables. A lot of the time when I myself am trying to write such a rythmic fast paced poem i tend to funk it up in ways of syllable use and beat. I envy your ability to make things fit so well. Prodigy in the maaking

[zainul]

You have a great passion for writing.
Just go ahead.
Grammar will be alright someday.
Nice poem on desert.