The Mountain of Life

Life will go on.

Life has its ups and its downs.

There will be smiles and frowns.

The road we travel,

It might even dazzle.

Just give it a chance,

And you might even dance.

So even if it's bumpy.

And maybe a little lumpy.

Remember,

You are a climber,

Up this mountain of Life.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar. Criticism is wanted and welcomed!

Reviews

[Annabelle Lee]

You never fail to amaze me with your writing skills, this poem has a great message and you always have a very good way of getting your point across, thank you. For being such a wonderful writer, Thank you for shairing it with us, and thank you for writing about things that people care about.

As for the writing of the poem, haha you've noticed i was a syllable nazi, but the mixed up rythm of the poem really added to the meaning. like sayng life is a bit mixed up in itself.

Bravo

[Brittany]

Thank you :) It means a lot when people are actually reading and enjoying my poems

[Annabelle Lee]

i never miss one... consider me your cafe stalker haha i severely enjoy your writing and im hoping to see a whole lot more