Her

You want her,

You love her,

I watch as you touch her,

I want you,

I need you,

But I will concede you,

If you want her,

and if you love her,

Than I guess…

I should let you have her.

Author's Note

Sorry I haven't been on in a while. I am very close to having my printed, bound and completed first copy of my first published book. I couldn't be more excited.

Reviews

[KeithEBaucum]

I hate being in love with someone who's not in love with me.

[Brittany Bostic]

An understandable feeling. Thank you for the comment.

[DrD]

I like the simplicty of this work and the soul baring honesty. Well done. An enjoyable read.

[Brittany Bostic]

Thank you for your review

[David Scott]

Very nice! The act of love is the ability to give freedom to the "object" of your desires. Maturity is still not the absence of pain however...
Well done and congrats on the book.

[Brittany Bostic]

Thank you for your review and the congratulations.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

congrats on your first book, that is always really exciting.

yes, on this poem too....get out while the getting out is good, and with some pride...

if that person wants someone else, fighting for him or her does no good...better to find someone who really wants Us....

are you getting buried in snow?

j.

[Brittany Bostic]

Thank you for your review. And yes I am, it is quite the blizzard in Maryland right now :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

stay safe.