Questioning intimacy

Questioning intimacy

A Poem by Brittney

What's to come is fatal

A darkened sunrise after a flowers bloom

What's intimate is imagined

A right of passage into an empty room

© 2013 Brittney


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It's meaningful with great metaphors and amazing brevity. Nice work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


its dark but still its lively shows that overcoming is not up in head. its inside great.

you named it nicely^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


its dark but still its lively shows that overcoming is not up in head. its inside great.

you named it nicely^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


Powerful short lovely incredible done!-100

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this as well! It may be short but sometimes you don't need a lot to make an impact and this to me makes a great impact :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Bleak but powerful stuff.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on August 13, 2013
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Brittney
Brittney

Roxbury, NJ



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