Isolated

Stop
Do you see me?
I'm here
Alone
Isolated
Four walls
Intimidating
Closing in
Slowly

Wait
Are you listening?
The tick
Tock
Is frightening
Time
Is disintegrating
Only
Constantly

Pause
Can you feel it?
The ambiance
Is shifting
Chills
Overcome skin
I'm lonely
Waiting..
Waiting..

Stop.
Stop!
Stop!!!
Can you see me?

I think
I'm
Disappearing

Reviews

[Lexi Richard]

Very enthralling and well penned. I enjoyed this greatly.

[Brittney]

Thanks so much!

[Lexi Richard]

You're welcome!

[bobc]

I really like the ending...good piece...bob

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You can hear the voice in this one... as the reader you feel the urge to just let her out of the isolation... but you portray this well within the lines of this verse...

[Brittney]

Sometimes I feel I'm the one in isolation in my own mind, thanks for the review!

[space_rulers]

Really like the flow of this poem, definitely puts an interesting emotion out.

[Rosaria_V]

I honestly love it! Such a great job. Your truly talented :)

[Brittney]

Awesome! Thanks! :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Fantastic piece. Powerful word choice. I read it a couple times.

[Brittney]

Thank you!

[Mizo4]

it depicts a sense of falling into isolation nicely.

[Brittney]

Thank you kindly