Am I Good Enough Yet?

Hair done

Makeup on

Am I good enough yet?

Size 0

I follow my hero

Am I good enough yet?

Nails fake

Don't eat cake

Am I good enough yet?

Don't sleep

Only weep

Am I good enough yet?

Don't talk

Only walk

Am I good enough yet?

I guess I never was

And now I'll never be

I am gone, 

and you're the cause

Author's Note

I want some help with this one on how to make it better.. Please and thank you. :)

Reviews

[Dan Hiland]

I'm no poetry expert, so I don't know how much help I can be. But your message came through- exactly the type of message one would expect from a "broken beauty". And I love that photo...