Raindrops

I love the rain, and it inspired me to write this.

Raindrops, raindrops

oh how beautiful you flow. 

Watching you fall on to the 

ground so tenderly, doesn't make

me feel so low. 

You're so effortlessly beautiful, 

in the simplest of ways. Sometimes, i wish you would fall everyday. 

Raindrops, raindrops

come back tomorrow. 

I want to it to be a day without

so much sorrow.  

Author's Note

Please ignore any mistakes, or grammar problems. I clearly haven't noticed them if they're there.

Let me know what you think :)

Reviews

[pinhead07]

All for it, rainy days are awesome, a nice read, wonderful write..

[Brook]

Thank you.

[Frieda P]

Odd how different people view rain, it brings some comfort and other's can't stand it when it's bleak, good read.

[Brook]

It is, we all have different views.
Thank you :)

[Frieda P]

My pleasure Jade. :-)

[Blue]

I love rainy days! Haha. I just don't like the mud.

[Brook]

Rainy days are relaxing, unless you have stuff to do. Not so fun!

[Simon Welsh]

Beautiful. You're improving, hon.

[Brook]

WOAAAAAAH! Did Elliott just say beautiful?! SHOCKER.
Thank you :)

[s y e]

I lurve the rain too, girlie. I wish I could just go out every time it rained but of course I'd get ill.... oh well, who cares? ;) Loved this one, it's perfect!

[Brook]

Me too. Oh yes, like a permanent cold! :')
Thank you, very much!

[Shaquana Adams]

come back tomorrow.
I want to it to be a day without
so much sorrow.

I understand completely. I love this poem. Thanks for sharing :)

[Brook]

Thank you for reviewing!

[The Girl Who Loved Too ..]

There's something about the rain...

[Brook]

There is, indeed. I don't know what it is, but there's just something.

[Marcus]

Sweet yet so simple, I like it :)

[Brook]

Thank you :)