Anything for you

Like the sun does for the moon, 

I would hide away just so the 

World could see you shine.

Like your eyes do for you,

I would show you the world, 

From another point of view.

Because darling, there's

Nothing in the world I wouldn't do.

As you're my one and only, 

And I belong to you. 

Author's Note

I'm kinda suffering from writers block, this feel unfinished. I don't know.
Tell me what you think.
(Sorry if you don't like Adele, but i do.)

Reviews

[dakarai]

I love the first line. It sets the pace for the theme of the poem. Self sacrifice to encourage someone else to reach their full potential. I love the encouragement of it all.

[Brook]

Thank you, Dakarai.

[Laura Harrison]

This is such a sweet piece :)

[Brook]

Thank you, Laura. :)

[ashesonfire]

I think the "and I belong to you" finishes up the piece nicely, I don't feel like it is unfinished at all. For being a writers block piece, it's very nice!

[Brook]

Thank you, Ashes.

[Shaquana Adams]

A cute romantic piece. It's perfect the way it is :)

[Brook]

Thank you, very much.

[Petewa]

Even when your suffering from writers block, you still write brilliant poems. Really like this one.

[Brook]

Thank you, Petewa.

[Brittany Zedalis]

While it may feel unfinished to you, I feel it is perfect. Great job! :]

[Brook]

Thank you, Brit.

[Simon Welsh]

Nicely written. A part two could be good.

[Brook]

Thank you.

[Stefanie Holmes]

This was so innocently sweet... I loved it!

~Stefanie

[Brook]

Thank you, Stef.

[stars are far]

wow.. i totally loved the first stanza..
well done :)

[Brook]

Thank you, Stars are far.

[Madalyn Beck]

This is a very romantic piece. I wouldn't say that it's unfinished, but if you feel you should add more, then pour your heart out! I would love to read whatever else you have to say.

Though, I find it to be a beautiful write. :)

[Brook]

Thank you, Madalyn.