Disquietude

And as i lay in bed that night

Without you by my side, 

i began to gently cry.

I cried because you weren't

there, and my mind had time to spare.

I cried because i couldn't hear you snore, 

or feel your arms around my waist whilst 

you sleepily demanded  i snuggle up more. 

I cried because my ears missed your voice, 

And my mouth missed kissing you goodnight. 

I cried because i knew there was a chance you 

won't ever lay there again, because 

all good things must come to an end.

Then as the tears dried on my face, and

i turned to see your empty place. I placed my 

hand where you last lay, and gently drifted off 

that way. 

Author's Note

I'm back after a short break, and this is the only thing i wrote whilst i was gone haha.

Enjoy.

Reviews

[Simon Welsh]

This is so beautiful. Wow.

[Brook]

Thank you, Elliott.

[Luna Zerimar]

...

Brook, you're amazing.

I can relate too well, if you know what I mean, though.

[Brook]

Thank you, Jess.
I get you, sorry that you can relate, but i'm glad you enjoyed this.

[Stefanie Holmes]

You expressed the pain of losing a close love in such a pure, raw sense. I loved it!

~Stefanie

[Brook]

Thanks Stef.

[Brittany Zedalis]

Heartbreaking. Brilliant work!

[Brook]

Thank you, Brittany.

[Madalyn Beck]

Sad and beautiful. A great write, Brook. Keep writing! (:

[Brook]

Thank you, Madalyn.

[A. Amos]

Then as the tears dried on my face, and
i turned to see your empty place. I placed my
hand where you last lay, and gently drifted off
that way.

Great write and above lines were brilliant; good job my friend

[Brook]

Thank you, Amos.

[Saddam]

Then as the tears dried on my face, and
i turned to see your empty place. I placed my
hand where you last lay, and gently drifted off
that way.

Ah....A sad poetry. Now there is nothing left only your memories and no one is here for sharing my woe. An Amezing thought.

[Brook]

Thank you, ssadd.

[melissa]

Amazing poem i love it keep up the great work i hope to read more

[Brook]

Thank you Melissa, always a pleasure to hear from you.

[melissa]

You're welcome

[Laura Harrison]

Love is a painful thing when it's gone. But you made the pain beautiful :)

[Brook]

Thank you.