My Love For You

The rain cools my face from warmth. I cry in the rain and no one hears me. I'm all alone. Depression fills my head. No one can even tell I’m crying in the rain. I feel so scared inside. No one to comfort me. No one to hold me. No one by my side. Depression, depression. My heart wants you and only you. I tried to change for you, but you are so hard to please.                      I cry in the rain and no one hears me. I'm all-alone. Depression fills my head. No one can even tell I'm crying. I feel so scared inside. No one to comfort me. No one to hold me. No one by my side. I cry but you don't care. You abuse me and leave me. My heart wants you and only you. Can't you see what you've done to me?                          I cry alone. Pain kills me inside. But you don't care. You abuse me and leave me. I cry alone. Dying inside, no one sees what you've done to me.

Author's Note

just ignor the misspellings i'm sure theirs tons of it. um its really sad but i hope you like it. it took me a long ime to write it.

Reviews

[Casper Cross]

I see you took my suggestion to heart... lol... its still very beautiful work just without all the misspelled words. Great job.

[Casper Cross]

lol... you need to invest in a spell checker... again very pretty imagery here. You might want to break your poems up into stanzas, each stanza is one line rather than as block in a paragraph form. That will make it a little easier to read. That's my only suggestion b...