No Longer(version2)

someone saying no longer will they take the other persons crap.

                  I shed a tear. 
  But you no longer care.  
  I cry for help but you no longer help.  
  I cry alone and die inside but you no longer care.   
  Now I learn that you will never care for me, for you hate me and no longer love me.  
   So I die and rest in peace but you no longer love for me or care for me, but if only you would I would rise from the dead and be loved again, and not some outcast to you. I could be loved again and no longer feel so scared and alone but you will no longer will you love me. So now i cry and die inside, cry for help, and die alone but you no longer help or care. I think I'm starting to get the hint that you would never love me again...  
                  
 

Author's Note

hope u like it.

Reviews

[Pookie]

I love it!!! My friend is going thorugh that and I feel so bad 4 HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was beautiful!!!!!!!!

[Owl City]

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!

[Brooke]

That was really good, and deep. I like how parts from the begining repeted in the end, when I need for that person was no longer there. Although I'm sorry if you had to go through anything like that. the Poem was good, great succsess. I loved the signature at the end, expetially since I have the same name. :)

[Casper Cross]

So hmmm... who could she be talking to? Could be someone who broke her heart but could it also be her own negative attitude maybe? Or a parental figure who refuses to build her up?
Tell me... what does the poet say?
Nice work...