The Hands of TimeA Poem by BryanaBearSome days I just wish I wish I could turn back the hands of time Start all over again. A clean slate, I’ll figure out where it all went wrong. Come on; let’s turn back the hands of time. We’ll start all over, start brand new. It will be just and me and you. Lets just press rewind; |
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Nice work. I don't know if you did it intentionally, but the repetition works. History repeats itself, as the saying goes. I enjoyed that bit. We all have regrets, but it's how we respond to the next repetition that matters. Lives are full of second chances and redos, so to speak. It's really a matter of recognizing the pattern and responding appropriately. I like this. Keep up the good work.
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