Smile For Me

I just wanna see you smile

I’m here to stay not just around for awhile.

My heart is yours and yours alone.

My love is strong and grows by the day.

So baby please, just smile for me.

Reviews

[emipoemi]

A poem of near perfection. Reminds me of "This living hand" by Keats in a way. I would put a line break at "I'm here to stay not just around for a while"....just seems more powerful that way, so "stay" can be emphasized.

[BryanaBear]

I just wanna see you smile
I’m here to stay
not just around for awhile.
My heart is yours
and yours alone.
My love is strong
and grows by the day.
So baby please,
just smile for me.

[BryanaBear]

Like this?

[emipoemi]

Well.....I only intended the suggestion for that one line, but that looks 100 times better. Perfect!

[Phillitup]

smiles light up the world...sometimes, if someone stops smiling, you can't help but miss it...

[BryanaBear]

its true, you grow so fond of a smile. It becomes a well loved characteristic of a person

[Kamran Javed]

how nicely written this!

[BryanaBear]

thank you