Humanity

Time is ticking fast,
And all we have to show is this.
A rusty dream,
A broken stone.

What happen to the stronghold?
Where did the good people go?
We have become in debt to our sins.
We now serve Death.

We are doomed,
No hope,
Unless we step up.
One person at a time.

Author's Note

A short poem of what I feel is happening to humankind.

Reviews

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

Short but yet really good. Very meaningful indeed.

[Bumble]

Thank you! :D

[Tabitha t]

This is a very fine poem with a good concept. I enjoyed this and it makes you think about where we are headed as a whole.

[Bumble]

Thank you! :D

[Kelsey]

This is really strong and meaningful. You're a wonderful writer, keep it up, I love reading your work. (:

[Bumble]

Thank you! :D I love reading your work. I haven't been able to actually sit down to write or read. So I am happy I can get some time to.

[Kelsey]

Of course, and thank you! (:

[That_Guy]

My faith lays heavily on Human Potential, it'd be nice if we'd all live up to it

[Bumble]

One person at a time. :)

[That_Guy]

I'll start it off ;)

[Bumble]

:D Good, now we have 2. Lol

[That_Guy]

woo