Breath of Oceans

Poetry

Supine and dreaming,
Of ocean's crest,
I inhale, exhale...
Waves progress,
Inhaling, exhaling...
God's breath,
These restless waters.
My sustenance,
My salvation,
My life.

Reviews

[Shelly Wiseberg]

Very nicely put and written, Shelly

[Thomas James Martin]

Beautiful, like the holy vibration or "Nam" is the Hindi name for this vibration, I believe. Anyway, nicely done.
Tom

[Rainbowco]

Lovely.

[Noename]

Wow, I really like this. Its short and simple, but all at the same time, paints the most vivid picture of the beach and its emotions.

Thank you for the great work!