Tears For A Stranger

a dedication to something that's touched my heart in a way I haven't felt in a long time

I don't even know you, and yet somehow I'm torn apart

Because the story of your struggle has deeply touched my heart

I guess you could say I can relate, or sympathize with you

In my life there were many times, where I was bullied too

Your story is one of the saddest to ever grace the page

A child who chose to leave the world at such an early age

To hear a story such as yours, fills me with such anger

And leaves me with a broken heart, and tears shed for a stranger

 

 

 

Reviews

[Johanna]

Wow.. this one was just.. wow. I´ve been bullied too, and I just thought this poem was beautiful and just I don´t know how to decribe the feeling I got when I read "In my life there were many times, where I was bullied too." thankyou so much for this poem! truly beautiful and supportive and sending a message as well. You have talent Ryan! and this poem was stunning.. it really really was. Thankyou

[Child of God]

You're welcome :) and thank you for probably one of the greatest reviews I've ever received

[A. Amos]

This is simply elegant and wonderful write, you wrote from the deepest part of your heart and while reading one can sense from soul...amazing piece of work my friend, keep it up.

[Child of God]

Thank you so much

[A. Amos]

you're most welcome

[Natalia]

wow really fantastic! Very beautifully written. I really feel the emotion behind your words

[Child of God]

thank you :)

[Charlie]

so strong and full of emotion. It's something we all can (or at least I) relate to. Great job

[Child of God]

Thank you that means a lot lol

[Jeannear]

very beautiful poem ryan.....

[Child of God]

Thank you lol

[Cryingkate]

OMG RYAN >>>> I got words coming for you from my heart. Be Right back..

[Child of God]

Thank you? :P

[Cryingkate]

I took a detour Ryan and got lost for the day, Sorry to make you wait so long. but now I'll have to get back tonight to what I was writing. I fell asleep at the computer this morning right after I started writing what I said I was and had the funniest dream. Can't wait to share it.

[captain]

it's an emotional fullfilment with you know you can relate to a story of someone and somehow help this person manage to lift up his/her emotions into a hopeful one. very nice piece sir.

[Child of God]

Thank you very much

[captain]

welcome :)

[hmarieee]

this is absolutely touching. I too am moved by strangers stories but, you are not a stranger to me anymore.
-hannahmarie xo

[Child of God]

Thank you :) and glad to hear it lol

[Hailey Shay]

Profound words in an easy tone or manner. You can tell that you enjoy writing in general and the simplicity of your writing intrigues me.

[Child of God]

Thanks :) I also like acting lol just made a video for a friends poem today

[Hailey Shay]

Thats awesome! Poetry is an amazing form of expression and a video that must have been amazing to create

[Child of God]

http://youtu.be/B6dp-AA0Xvw see for yourself lol

[Hailey Shay]

Pretty awesome!! Really good poem as well

[Child of God]

Thanks :) that means a lot

[Dreamer]

Beautiful poem... I really enjoyed it

[Child of God]

Thanks lol

[Dreamer]

always welcome!!