Summer Song

Blame it on the entrance,

Yeah, you know she made it,

 Cause she’s always smiling at you.

 

Blame it on the music,

Yeah, the rhythm’s blinding,

But she’s only dancing with you.

 

Fight to be the one that,

Holds her up and shows her,

What there is yet to do.

 

Gently start all over,

Quiet beneath the summer,

There is so much left for you.

 

Reviews

[de-oblitus]

this flows beautifully, like that soft summer breeze.

[Missy Moooooo]

I like this writing nice job (:

[Sarah]

wonderfull poem.

[Mehul Rwat]

You write very well. I do not find much fault with your writing. I like it very much, instead.

[angelina neves]

lovely!

[EMF]

Real nice. Got a good beat to it. I liked it

[amdc101]

Very pretty. Nice write.

[Dahlia Phoenix]

This was very sweet indeed. Competing to be the one who cherishes her heart with one dance...magnificent.