Oh, What A World We Live In

Oh, What A World We Live In

A Poem by Burr the Story Sorceress

Oh, what a world we live in.

Full of hatred and pain.

Oh, what a world we live in.

With anger as high as a crane.

Oh, what a world we live in.

Poisoned by killing and war.

Oh, what a world we live in.

With people who act like wild boars.

Oh, what a world we live in.

Where no one really sings.

Oh, what a world we live in.

Where little angels lose their wings.

© 2008 Burr the Story Sorceress


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WoW, Burr. I love this its so dark and so sweet. I completly understand everything you are saying in this. Very good write, I love it. As do I all of your work....
I'm sorry I'm not a very good friend...

I still love you Brittany. ~HUGS~
S.D.Blankenship the GOTHICCOWBOY

Posted 17 Years Ago


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I am a kinda loud person who is very blunt. I tend to talk before I think. I go with the flow, most of the time. When I get excited, my stutter comes back with a vengence. I do the best I can and that.. more..