The Night

Come to me dressed in nothing but the night,
With just a touch of moon upon your brow;
Your lips, aflutter, ravens’ wings in flight,
Your eyes a sea of secrets meant to stow.

Undress the silence covertly with me,
Till every word unspoken glistens nude;
Longings whispered run furious and free,
Upon the peaks of passion to be strewed.

In places dark I’ll trace the silk of you,
Till swelling sighs crescendo in a scream;
Untill the deepest bud its essence spews
Upon the moistened petals of this dream.

If dawn strips every dream of tender heat,
Love smoulders still under a crumpled sheet.

Author's Note

Erotic sonnet.

Reviews

[JessyJacob]

Hi
I see your poem may not look erotic. But for few it's true love that inspires every second to live for him.
I read misunderstandings and lessons learned make bond strong. Arguments and fight destroys the love in each other.
I see character and behaviour definitely defines the bond. I wonder for couples it's not. Every mistake they share keeps the bond making from breaking it. I don't know when I have not seen you kind. I see animals in kind and they speak to me with less of words to say.

Your emotions carry more of love than erotica if I misunderstood erotic word.

You write this kind of writes where only a person in love could express, you look as great as one more shakespeare the world has got. I definitely like to share these poems to world where a cunningness could decrease and people start being nice.

I am your first and big fan of you. It's not I don't like your other way of erotica but I don't want to see nudity even in clothing.
This love of bee and fly is a open scene and I see a noc for them. And it never felt fly is misusing flower but just loving you so much 💗.

You can write ✍️ good and bad . But make worth of even when writing bad. It will definitely inspire everyone.

Jessy Jacob ❤️

[BuzzyB]

Thanks a lot for the inspiring words, Jessy. Your words mean a lot to me. Yes, even in these words, somewhere, there is love. And that's such a wonderful feeling. Have a beautiful day, my friend.

[JessyJacob]

hi
thank you so much.
kindly

[Tania Mo]

This is soft but works like a bomb. Erotic is the best always. I love ;)

[BuzzyB]

Thank you Tania. A sweet poet friend. I appreciate you.

[AJNJ]

Er mindblowing stuff. I can see you're inspired. This is raw heated gold. Great stuff Buzzy.

[BuzzyB]

Thank you AJ. My inspiration was a night. I appreciate you.