I Love You

I Love You

A Poem by Kiriko
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It has some mistakes. But you'll still love me even if has mistakes right?

"
I Love You

These 3 simple words can have so much impact
on a person.
But these words, I Love You...who will ever say these to me?
Will I sit and wait for someone brave enough to walk up to me
and help me up and hold me close and whisper I Love You?
No, No one cares, everyone just merries on with there life.
No one wants to stop and help. No one ever will.
Such a sad curse that the world is upon.
People unable to help each other.
Friends, going against each other.
Couples, fighting.
Parents, divorces.
Can't we all just stop and say I'm sorry, and and say I love you?
For friends, don't say this, they might get creeped out and
you guys might argue some more.
All fighting ever does it make us want to keep them out
from our life. Shut them out like a anti bodies do to viruses.
We're just like that. We are just anti bodies.
Kicking friends out.
Couples, not talking. Just like babies. They can't talk to each other,
they just cry like babies.
Parents, divorcing. Like a court meeting. Only one side wins.
Again, these words I Love You. Have a strong impact
on this world we call Earth.
But what does I Love You really even mean?
Can you tell me?
 These 3 small letter words, said quickly,
does it go in through head and out through your ear?
Or does it go to heart? And Make it feel warm?
What if you someone you hate, tells you
I Love You. Will you feel the same way?
Or will your heart drop and die?
What if you tell someone you love them,
and they don't say I Love You back?
Does your heart drop turn into a fragile piece of glass and shatter
into thousands of pieces?
Does it feel like that your heart has a deathgrip?
I say these 3 words to you.
I Love You.
Now how do you feel?
When I say this I feel happy.
Letting you know my true feelings.
Once you tell me that small one second word.
No.
My heart turns into acid and dissolves.
Bringing tears into my eyes.
You make me run away.
But I still
Love You~♥

© 2010 Kiriko


Author's Note

Kiriko
..Mistakes..are mistakes..ignore them

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thank you!

Posted 15 Years Ago


aww this is a sad poem but it is an amazing poem still. I liked how you compared things like couples to babies and such. This was a very good poem well done:)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on June 19, 2010
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Kiriko
Kiriko

In Your Closet, CT



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