Positively Kitsch

Just from a bridge in a song I'm working on.

And

I

KNOW about wars and

I KNOW that there's pain and

I KNOW that there's fights and

I KNOW they aren't games

But I've just got this feeling

Way deep down inside

That everything,

EVERYTHING

Is gonna

Be

Fine.

Author's Note

Ya I know it's short :P But in all fairness it isn't really a poem.

Reviews

[Hannerr.]

I so TOTALLY agree with everything that poem is saying. (=

[A Spectacular Case]

I love you, cus it's all gonna be fine.
And it's always all gonna be fine, somehow.

[Jasmine Parker.]

LOVE IT.
Become Prime Minister or sommat, yeah?
xxxx

[Salvatore Buttaci]

It's got the workings of a good song, and all songs come from poetry. They have rhythm and they move the reader and/or listener along. They just can't help moving with the words and/or lyrics. I like your poem; I'd like to see it when it's a finished song.

Sal

[Alice]

:D
It bloody well is gonna be fine. Especially after that. I love it.
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