Just do it.

Inspired by the most unlikely of sources :D

Sweetheart,

For God's sakes,

You shouldn't look at him,

Not with that look.

No look at all.

You're pretending!

Yes you are we all know!

'Cos your eyes, right?

They're glazed.

Except for when...

This club's too small for you,

This WORLD's barely enough,

And you know it.

 

So run,

Run up to that podium

And scream your heart out

To everyone in this room,

Like it can never end,

Like it's all you have

All you need!

Because it is.

This room,

This song,

This bassline,

Dancing with your best....friend.

Author's Note

How is it? I don't really remember writing it all that well.

Reviews

[J.Black]

I loved this gurl, all your pieces of writing as brilliant!
It's short and honest, It was swell. :)

I love it! This poem tells me exactly what I should do.

[J.benjamin Rose]

It happens.
And this poem has my existential cum all over it.
Its great.
Makes me wanna scream.
Cos, I'm a little too quiet.

[THE LOST ROSE]

I enjoyed the rythmn of the conversation. The command you placed in this poetry is the ulitmate call to action. I can't wait to read your other material. Thanks for sharing.

[Heather ♥]

I loves it!

[James Kay]

It's great. Simple and honest and true. Doesn't need picking apart and analysing, it just is. Great Work! :)