Untitled Haiku

A haiku inspired by an image.

These gray structures loom

like a dead alloy forest

a mill's epitaph

Reviews

[albee]

"alloy forest" rings like a bell tower
the structure looms in the antennae image
the newly evolved information sphere
swifter then the water ways that used
to turned the stone to grind our grain.

[Chris Shaw]

So many in that dead alloy forest. Hope the whole lot is destroyed and replaced by some healing green. What an eye sore. Nicely done Carrie.

Chris

[keith]

a great perspective that rings truth
i have yet to understand where all the trees felled in the amazon rain forest are going and what is being produced?
a very good write