Solemn Harmony

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Solemn word breeds Sorrowed tears

And hollowed face spawns grotesque fears

Life drips

Drops

Fades into nothingness

And vessel once filled with emotion

Rots 

Into oblivion

Mournful wails turn immortalized

As voices of plenty 

Wail...and cry

And as final tears fall

And body rests in peace

The heavens shed their sorrow 

In saddened symphony

Yes...

Solemn word breeds sorrowed tears

Hush, 

Let them flow like rivers

Author's Note

I had a hard time coming up with a title for this one...don't really know if it suits the piece. Tell me what you all think. :)

YR

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Good rhyming and fresh images here. Also sharp psychologically, with the mention of the relationship of solemn words and tears. Philosophically, it seems to combine Ecclesiastes with Marcus Aurelius. Actually, I think another title might reflect the poem's meaning more accurately. Since the solemn words and tears device appears more than once, perhaps a title incorporating it would be appropriate.

[Sira YR]

Thank you so much John the Baptist...I'm going to be changing the name of it so I'll take what you said into consideration. Thank you for your review. :)

YR.

[midnight]

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[midnight]

I love this poem amazing work

[Sira YR]

Thank you for your review, midnight. I'm glad you liked it :)

YR.

[midnight]

yw yout poems are amazing

[Curtis.Lenker]

This poem is awesome. The title suits it well. Good job here.