You (Septolet Form)

You
cover me
like Dawn's
misty dew

I'm refreshed
by the sight
of you.




Note:
The septolet has 14 words and has one main theme, it is composed of
2 stanzas with 7 words each.


cynthiabuhainbaello
11.23.12

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A lovely love poem. Now this simple technical piece I could attempt I guess.

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

Thank you John McFadyen

[Marie]

Very good. What about the rhyming scheme? Are the last words of each stanza supposed to rhyme?

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

Thank you Marie.

The septolet has fourteen words. It is broken between two stanzas that make up the fourteen
words. Each stanza can have seven words each but that is not a requirement. Both stanzas deal
with the same thought and create a picture.

Example:

HEART SONG

You play me
like
a violin

One caress,
heartstrings sing
sweet melody
of love
- written by ~Dovey