I agree with the poem. Eyes can open doors and can close them too. Eyes filled with joy and happiness can create joy to the person blessed to look into them. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote
Yes are eyes helping feed the mind and soul. Love how this comes together epically the first stanza
The eyes are windows of the heart
wherein transparency will show
A myriad feelings to impart
From where in sadness, tears do flow.
Great job, well done.
Oh my,,,,I thought I was singing the poem because of the rhythmic pattern. (=
Not only it is a song to my ears, but also a garden full of flowers to my eyes. The message is very clear and "well-craftedly" laid.
Posted 13 Years Ago
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13 Years Ago
Thank you Kabayan - I appreciate your reading it and leaving a comment.
13 Years Ago
You're welcome madam (=
I did it 'coz i take pride of Filipino writers,,,just like you madam (.. read moreYou're welcome madam (=
I did it 'coz i take pride of Filipino writers,,,just like you madam (=
I just write poetry and enjoy it. I also write essays and short stories (posted in another site). Thank you for taking time to view my page and my writings and I appreciate all who read and leave a.. more..