My Lord's Love

A description of my lord's love for me

I'm broken and bruised

Abused and misused

I'm hopeless they say

To turn from my evil ways

Yet You lift me up

You take me home

You wait ever so patiently

For my trust

For my love

Because, in Your eyes, Lord

I'm a diamond in the rough

A flower hideing in the bud

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think!
Love,
CreativeCookie

Reviews

[Criss ;)]

wow, what a great write, i llove this piece as usual "cookie"...hey, wait before i say sth about this writin', i wanna say that....your name makes me crazy about cookies", whenever i see your this name my tongue wants to eat some choco - cookies, even my saliva falls down to think about chocho - cookies....lol :)
i hope you love too to eat much choco : cookies expect creation of cookiesssss...ahahah :)
ok...now come to the point, i loved these lines
in Your eyes, Lord
I'm a diamond in the rough.....
great write, i think you're an eyes balls' of lord that's in blue color...lol, don;t worry, after this life, you're gonna b the same as you want to b......lol

again you fluttered me by this piece, but as you said in your author's note that what we think about your this piece, then i wanna say, it's need some more lines because i don;t think it's completed yet here, yeah, ,i know i love to read short poems, but i think here in this piece, you should have to add two more lines to complete this beautiful piece.......sorry, for my this suggestion if it hurts......i apologise for that/....

anyway, have this for this piece from my heart 91.3/100 :)
have a nice writin' :)
hey, wait...i forgot my hug again.....so, *tight hugs*....

take care.....!!

[CreativeCookie]

Thanks for the suggestion! I'll see what I can do about the length, and thanks for the hug!

[Criss ;)]

Your welcome "Cokkieeee" :) I loved your hug too :)

[Rahman Bin Taleb]

the agony a see.getting something in good in odd

[Mary Christabel George]

Wow! I am deeply impressed that you believe in the Lord.
Your faith in him is so sincerely & clearly reflected in your poem.
Beautiful is the right word to address your write.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like this, you described His love greatly with just a few words. I liked how you used "A flower hideing in the bud" We may not seem all that special to people just looking at us while they pass by but deep inside if we let Him in our heart He can make us blossom into something beautiful.

Great Job

[TheDarkKnight]

Oh my goodness thats beautiful! You have a gift for writing, a wonderful gift that the Creator can bestow upon anyone.
God Bless!!!