Lost never Found

Run up the staris of the abondoned building

 

With a note in my pocket  which my pants are shielding

 

The note will explain my fall that would have a public traumatize

 

Just staring at the ground has my broken heart paralyzed

 

Leaving this world of the one girl that I cherish

 

Suddenly I turn around and see her causing a interference

 

but before she graps me I lunge towards death at the count of two

 

Leaving behind the note saying I did this because of you 

Reviews

[SimplyDisastrous]

I love the ending especially; the last two line This piece has quite alot of mistakes in it but, aside from that, the meaning in the depths of it speaks volumes. And that's more than enough. Good job.