Incarnate

This is a poem about animals (the Zoo attractions).

When my Chicken nuggets 

are gone 

and the Coca Cola 

is gone 

I realized, I've had a meal

But when I come home, 

There's a grasshopper outside 

in the garden

Jumping around the stone animal statues, 

But it lands in a spider web

The spider, big and black eats it

And I think about,

at the end of sunset 

how many things

in the world can eat me

 

Reviews

[Broken.buddy]

I love the way you used anaphora at the beginning of the poem and also your use of similes. These two things made the poem more memorable to read and added style. Also, I really liked how you described the animals and insects so vividly