Time

Scribbled this down on a piece of paper, no edit

It's odd isn't it;

The way time moves.

How someone who was once so significant,

Falls through your fingers,

And disappears in the cracks

That is now your past.

Reviews

[~]

I like the transition of the thought. Linear like the time. Methodical and stoic.

[Charlee Richards]

Thank you :) glad you liked it

[SuspectGray]

I'm reminded of a Rolling Stones song verse...."your just a memory"....The person may be gone but the memory lingers on....till we forget them all together.

[Charlee Richards]

Love those lyrics :) Thank you for your comment, and thank you for sharing

[Zahra]

some things do put a great fight against time but everything think has to change ultimately. Nice thougj expressed in this honest write.

[Charlee Richards]

Thank you Zahra :)

[Tom McRoberts]

Another good write. You've made the abstract material, lending it more meaning (in the practical sense). Keep it up!

[Charlee Richards]

Much obliged :) Thank you for the positive reviews