Boys are Broken

Calloused hands from trying to build boys

ill prepared to be men 

Scar tissue on arteries, losing parts of me

on each mannequin I piece

together

And each time I try 

These malfunctioning prototypes

They never work just right 

Becasue all the words in their manuals read 

DISASTER 

Reviews

[Relic]

I like the way you wrote it. I suppose words could be said that would tell it from a man's viewpoint about women too. :)

[Monday Parker]

Damn. Girl. I feeeeeel this one. Like chills and deep understanding of your words. Good job dude. The Scar tissue on arteries was solid.

[Chenin Marie]

Thank you!! I really apprecitae the feedback