SAT: Sarah's Story Part 3

My mother was a sweet woman before, my father went a-knocking on death's door. Then when he went on to be with the lord, all my mom ever did was mourn. All I want to do is make her proud. Maybe then she'd say I love you instead of a shout. This test to some is all a big joke. Better go focus before my mind fills with smoke. Don't lose your train of thought Sarah a lot depends on this. So instead of your mom yelling at you she'll give you a kiss. 

Author's Note

I'm only 11 but be honest. CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. :) XD

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Great wisdom in your words. Take two to have a fight and one to create path to calm and peace. Peace is hard work. We must try. Powerful short story. Left the reader with something to think about.
Coyote

[Nadia]

Just one thing, I see they are all named the same thing. Maybe adding "part one", and "part two", and so on, would be useful. I'm still enjoying Sarah's adventures so keep them coming!