Someone

It’s to the point where I need someone with me that will understand.

People don’t understand how bad this hurts me.

I just need people to understand what I’m going through for the past four months.

People think I’m happy but I’m not I need someone back.

He made me happy every single day, I miss our talks we had, I miss his laugh, his smile, I don't know he just made me happy.

I remember when I was on the phone with him and he forgot that I was on the phone, it was about an hour then he realize I was still on the phone.

Now I can’t talk, see, or hear him anymore.

Reviews

[Silent Wolf]

*hugs* You displayed your emotion very well. Just one thing: "I just don't know he just made me happy." Sounds a bit awkward with two "just" in there. Perhaps take out the first one!

[Inject Positivity]

filled with heartbreak... i can understand how you felt when you wrote this poem.... it has been written in a free verse which is the best thing to do when someone is writing about this my pain.... it gives the opportunity to say the things the poet has in his/her heart....