Is She Joking?

My angel and my devil

(on either shoulder)

take nights off to get

drunk and play poker

so I can be a revelation

of guilt-free sarcasm

through written word

and half a laugh.

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Erica,

"My angel and my devil
(on either shoulder)"

A commonly used image, but you care this off since you personalize this and make these figure f angel and devil you own. The "take nights off", and "get / drunk and play poker".

Nicely done. Short. To the point. Nothing wasted. Enjoyed.

Very best regards,

Rick

[Marie]

Your angel and your devil leave you free to wander at will...not so for most of us...

[Tamia123]

May times I feel like my better judgement just leaves me too :P I loved the way this poem flows and the playfulness in it :) Great job with this one!

[TC Dunn]

lol…love it. So cute and funny. Very artistic as well.

[Amila Jay]

Pretty cool ... Nice write :))

[Luke Ritta]

nice poem....enjoyed this.

[Octob3r Star]

Sweet

[Akshat♥]

i myself play poker,lol
nicely done..i loved it!!
Keep writing:)

[koty bell]

awesome poem i liked this:)

[Little Birdie]

Rather amusing poem.

[Moflo]

I like the concept of this piece a lot, its very creative!