Is She Joking?

My angel and my devil

(on either shoulder)

take nights off to get

drunk and play poker

so I can be a revelation

of guilt-free sarcasm

through written word

and half a laugh.

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Erica,

"My angel and my devil
(on either shoulder)"

A commonly used image, but you care this off since you personalize this and make these figure f angel and devil you own. The "take nights off", and "get / drunk and play poker".

Nicely done. Short. To the point. Nothing wasted. Enjoyed.

Very best regards,

Rick

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

enjoyed well. good. with wishes.

[emmajoy]

Love the duel .. had me laughing, had me frowning .. has me wishing i could stop and read this brief poem over and over. Clever, punchy and a highly original picture of what and how!

[Alessander]

very tongue and cheek.

The idea of an angel and a demon playing poker intrigues me...would angels be able to bluff? hmmmm

[Rea]

cleverly written...it was short and to the point, i enjoyed reading it:)

[idk]

Wow. Nice job. Madde me smile.

Haha I love this one. It's short, simple, and to the point

[Black Swan Poetry]

lol very clever :)

[Revolutionary]

I probably play poker with your devil on the third friday of each month.She always wins.I love the poem and it made me laugh

[Yellow Butterfly]

Very witty and yes made me smile too.

We all have a little devilish side which loves to come out and play.

[Thea]

That was really brilliant...Short but stunning... :)))