Is She Joking?

My angel and my devil

(on either shoulder)

take nights off to get

drunk and play poker

so I can be a revelation

of guilt-free sarcasm

through written word

and half a laugh.

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Erica,

"My angel and my devil
(on either shoulder)"

A commonly used image, but you care this off since you personalize this and make these figure f angel and devil you own. The "take nights off", and "get / drunk and play poker".

Nicely done. Short. To the point. Nothing wasted. Enjoyed.

Very best regards,

Rick

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Interesting, inspiring, good truth spoken, bit of humor... nice and short, and says enough with a meaning.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

loved this it made me laugh
nice work

[Kyle]

AWESOME.

I love this imagination and it coolness....

[Rene Velez]

I like truths in short spurts...

[Mark]

The last line is perfect. I enjoy the shortness of the whole piece.

[Emily B]

awe-some

[MS. BABy]

lol...this is cute , funny but real...

[K.C. Zbryk]

Short but inspiring, and left me with a smile. Always nice to have a moment of quiet to reflect on the frantic things around us. Brilliant

[Ruth]

And when the demons allow a moment of repsite, we can try to gather a thought or two lol
Beautifully thought through love, clever piece of concise impact!
xoxo