Amaranthine eyes

Let me guide you to our special place
let not the moon or stars hypnotize
a momentary distraction of your gaze
give to me your amaranthine eyes
let me steal you away
sparkling in the dark of night
wildly chasing after moonrays

 

Reviews

[Belle]

Compact and precise. I like the diction very much and the tone of the poetic persona which created me a very calming mood. I think of this as a love poem wherein there is a yearning of possession to make the passion unfading. Rare it is the eyes of the "you", I cannot think of an eye with a shade of deep purple-red, so I was thinking that this could be the poetic persona's view of how beautiful the mirror of the soul of his/her love.

[Callum]

cool! i see passion in purple (a favorite color), it's in her eyes, and the way she looks at me. ;)
i like your thinking Belle, thanks!

Cal

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the desire and the places the poem took me. Good to chase the moonrays and enjoy the nights. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Callum]

I like to think so, i'm a night owl. thanks man!

[DCT ponderings]

I imagined myself laying under the night sky side by side with my love. This here my friend is what dreams are made of. Another Fav.

[Callum]

ah, now your spoiling me.... thanks again!

[DCT ponderings]

I can quit. Don't want all the adoration to go to your head. ;)

[Callum]

ha! very cute. ;o)

[Callum]

and thanks again, friend.

[DCT ponderings]

You're very welcome.

[Callum]

hope to catch ya later.. time to eat (always hungry) lol

[Priscilla Sayers]

Beautiful mystic piece rendering the image of a moment to steal one's breath away.

[Callum]

wow, thank you! :o)

[Priscilla Sayers]

:)

[Callum]

:o)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is interesting..it can be such a lovely love poem...or maybe there is something amiss...and the other person could be like a spider trying to put the fly under a spell...for evil purposes...

could go both ways....i like this.

[Callum]

Wow thanks! (interesting perception) It's about love, but I like your thinking on this one.

[Callum]

or rather, seduction of love.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Beautiful!..."wildly chasing after moonrays"...I love that thought..
If only amaranthine eyes could be just as hypnotizing as this write..not even close! :)

[Callum]

Thanks Robbie. You caught my typo. I just realized that. :o))