Rain

Drip.

Drip drop.

Plop.

The pavement is slapped.

Drop.

Drop drip.

Plop.

Rain falls.

Doink.

Ripple ripple ripple,

Trickle trickle trickle.

I drown in the rain's symphony.

Doink.

Plop.

Drip.

Dribble dribble dribble.

Drop.

Drip.

Drip.

Drip.

Doink.

Plop.

The sunlight streams through a tear in the clouds.

Drip.

A stray beam catches a drop.

A rainbow spreads.

Ploink.

Reviews

[shunik]

cute words for simple pleasure
=]

[Calibaster]

thanks

[LunarSong]

It really is a good poem.

[LunarSong]

Next time I see you you have to read me this poem, you're so good with sounds, it would sound so cool.

[Calibaster]

Ha, rain sounds aren't my forte, but I did do it for starscraper! She and her friend thought I was hailarious!

[Sami Khalil]

A unique write.
I like :
The sunlight streams
through a tear in the clouds.

[Elisa]

This is really cool. I like how you changed up how many words were in the lines. It has got a steady rhythm to it much like rain would, but then the statements that fall between give it character.

[Calibaster]

Thank you.