Awen #5

For all those who love to travel and wander, and all you big dreamers

Wandering the world has always,
always appealed to me.
I ache to explore the Vatican
and every old cathedral
I want to see every old, big place
places of power and depth
which even the birds respect
too much to nest in their rafters.
Every abandoned cave and
deserted beach
I long to touch parts of the earth
no human has laid hands on
and the parts that everyone has
and the parts no one wants to
I desire to see it all
Because I might change the world one day,
(if I'm lucky,)
but this world has to change me first.

Reviews

[Siegfried]

Nice twist at the ending stanza. A cheerful, positive outlook in words.

[Camryn Jeter]

Thank you.

[ZDMusgrove]

I just love the poem. It reminds me of my inner desire to travel the world and make new memories. So I say this is absolutely brilliant. Keep up the good work, and I hope to read more of your works. Also, if you want send me some requests and I'll read and look over your writing.

[Camryn Jeter]

Thank you so much! I appreciate the review and support. I'll definitely send you some things.