Winter

A Poem about winter, wrote in 4 minutes. Would like reviews!

The snowy blizzard wind,
tickles my skin.
Leaving me shiver,
lots of snow flakes deliver,
from the clouds above.
I know I will need gloves,
to keep my hands warm,
as lots of snowflakes swarm around me.

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem gave me a chill.
It is charmed work.

[Ken Yen]

You have some promise. Don't get discouraged, keep writing.