Land of concrete

it feels so good

Can you feel,
how the air has gotten colder?
Can you see,
How the day has gotten darker?
Tormentend lies,
no point to try,
cant save yourself,
from your tragic goodbye.

Lay down,
in box of frabric,
you'll soon melt away,
in its comfort of maddness,
Deeper and deeper,
they let you go,
soon you'll be trapped in the land of the unknown,
no chance to move,
no voice to speak,
your now part of the world of the concrete,

Author's Note

NOT DONE YET!

Reviews

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

even thought according to your note you are stating that thou is not done yet, i already think that this is AMAINZG O.O would work so well as a song... Greatness ^^