When i look in the mirror? What do i see?

Another School related writing.

When I look in the mirror. What do I see?

When I look in the mirror I see a girl.
Not just any girl. I see someone I call me.
When I look at me I look on the inside.
As I look in the mirror and I read my reflection.
The mirror is my book I read it chapter by chapter.
The mirror is quiet but it speaks only to me.
To me it shows the inner drama queen that’s me.
An original person inside shows I hope you can see.
On the outside I see my present self that`s now.
On the inside is my past. The inside hasn’t changed
The dreamer inside still dreams.
The past and the present still fight.
The past never wins but the past never loses.
I am one person on the inside and out but people fail to see that.
On the inside I am more responsible and more mature.
That person can handle life.
On the inside I can see someone I call me.
Whether it is the inside or the out both sides still shine.
On the inside the happy little girl smiles back at me. On the outside I see me ans my same reflection.
When I look in the mirror what do I see? I see only me.

Author's Note

A poem for Language class. Tell me what you think i kinda don't care for it.

Reviews

[Rose]

I think it's amazing. You definitely captured the differences between each, the comparison's you put to words are really beautiful. The different parts of you are great to come to terms with, it's as if you are standing in the mirror and can physically see the differences within yourself. Great job.

[highthought]

On the inside is my past
i always knew that the inisde is hidden Characteristics of a person
which will only be shown when we feel close to certain person
pls unlight me cause i use the word inside a lot in my poems
have a look at WIND or RAIN

[KAREN]

I kinda like it, It's looking in that mirror we all learn to like ourselves inside and out! Great job!!

[TheFemininePad]

Why are you writing poems that you don't care about. Writing is one of the most powerful ways that we can convey our experiences whether it be by stories or poems. We express our emotions, and by searching within some of our most powerful works come to life. A great author told me once to search deep down where the pain is within, and then write about that pain. I highly would recommend that.

[Silvario]

im not much of a poem guy, but i enjoyed it. its pehaps a touch choppy *shrugs* but what i really liked was the interesting perspective of a look inside ones self. and i think you did well to describe what you saw and get your message across.

very nicely done =)