Butterflies

You give me

Permanant butterflies.

I don't mind because

I feel like you're all I ever need.

I like sitting close to you,

So I can clumsily touch your hand.

And I like the way you smile at me,

And tell me that I look very nice.

You give me

Permanant butterflies.

 

Reviews

[shadadakiya]

cute,sounds like a first love

[Brianna Brie]

Sweet and innocent...the power of romantic love. I miss the butterflies!

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Very refreshing write. Wonderfully written. Nicely done.


Great Write.

[Travis Lawrence]

This is good, a nice and honest piece that is blissful in its simplicty, I did enjoy reading this! I'd like to see it expanded to make the butterflies a metaphor, perhaps describing what it would be like to have butterflies flying inside you, and why that makes you smile. Just a suggestion, very good none the less.

Have a nice day!

[THE BLACK SEAL]

this is very refreshing and conveys your feelings well