Bled

I step into my vault
Of broken hearts
And lock away all the words
To every love poem
I've ever Bled...

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

Short but definitely not lacking in substance...there is more than one interpretation swirling around in my mind as I take in these lines...the bleeding love poems that close it out is the kicker...a profound and plaintive little verse you've offered up here my friend.

[Caradoc]

Thank you my friend.

[Lyn Anderson]

I put this in my faves before reviewing it. This sums up exactly what it is like to try and put that lost relationship in perspective.

[Caradoc]

I guess it does. Thanks for reading and reviewing, my friend. :)

[Ghost of Jupiter]

This here just pierces the heart, Caradoc. A short stab of beautiful sorrow. I absolutely adore the last line... for it does seem as though we bleed out our hearts and souls in these words we scribe. Sometimes they are accepted, taken in and cherished, and other times they are tossed aside to never be thought about again. Our blood spilt upon the page, transfused from our heart to the pen... we all bleed, some just bleed ink. Loved this poem... profound and powerful. Brilliant.

[Caradoc]

Thank you, K. You've given me a wonderful review that expands upon the poem itself. :)

[Ghost of Jupiter]

you are very welcome, Caradoc, I am touched by your writing. :)

[Stevo The POE-t]

Holy crap man... I am blown away by this piece... It's short and right to the point... Great write man... I'm kinda jealous, lol I wish I could have wrote something like this...

[Caradoc]

Thanks a lot, Stevo.

Lately my mind has been failing to churn out anything longer than twenty words. So I've been writing short.